Chapter 6: Can’t Win ‘em All
It was Thursday, John’s day off. Just last week he had decided to be a super hero. It had been a month since he last saw the smoke monster. He was listening to the news on the radio. He heard that there was a robbery at a jewelry store. He reached into a bag and pulled out a costume. It was yellow, and covered him from head to toe. It had a yellow mask that covered his whole face. It also had a black cape. It had gloves and boots; they were also black. The last part of the costume was a belt that had a huge silver buckle. John flew to the jewelry store. He crashed through the roof and landed face first on the floor. John stood up and the robber shot him. The bullet bounced off, only leaving a small hole in John’s costume. John said, “freeze, villain, you can’t escape Lightman!” The robber replied, ”are you some kind of nut?” John shot a ray of light at the robber but he ducked and it hit the glass case behind him. The light reflected back and hit John into the wall. The robber escaped. ”What happened to beginners’ luck?” John wondered as he flew out of the building through the hole in the roof.
January 9th, 2007 at 8:21 pm
Noah-I really like your stories. My favorite (part) of your stories is their endings, the way you always end with John acting like nothing ever happened.- Write On Becca
January 31st, 2007 at 5:14 pm
Noah, i really like the way that you end all of your stories. You are a very good writer. Good Luck
February 18th, 2007 at 11:27 am
i want 2 wright like u!!!!